[DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-iana-cons-04

Elwyn Davies via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 20 September 2021 17:55 UTC

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Subject: [DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-iana-cons-04

Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-iana-cons-04
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2021-09-20
IETF LC End Date: 2021-09-16
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready with minor nits.

Major issues:
None

Minor issues:
None

Nits/editorial comments:
Abstract: The longer names of DS and NSEC3 should probably be included:  Viz, 
delegation signer (DS)  and authenticated denial of existence version 3 (NSEC3).

[DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dns… Elwyn Davies via Datatracker
Re: [DNSOP] [Last-Call] Genart last call review o… Lars Eggert