Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-12.txt

Erik Kline <ek@google.com> Sat, 24 August 2019 00:09 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-12.txt
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On Fri, 23 Aug 2019 at 14:18, <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Domain Name System Operations WG of the
> IETF.
>
>         Title           : The ALT Special Use Top Level Domain
>         Authors         : Warren Kumari
>                           Andrew Sullivan
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-12.txt
>         Pages           : 11
>         Date            : 2019-08-23
>
> Abstract:
>    This document reserves a string (ALT) to be used as a TLD label in
>    non-DNS contexts.  It also provides advice and guidance to developers
>    developing alternative namespaces.
>
>    [Ed note: Text inside square brackets ([]) is additional background
>    information, answers to frequently asked questions, general musings,
>    etc.  They will be removed before publication.  This document is
>    being collaborated on in Github at: https://github.com/wkumari/draft-
>    wkumari-dnsop-alt-tld.  The most recent version of the document, open
>    issues, etc should all be available here.  The authors (gratefully)
>    accept pull requests. ]
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-12
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-12
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-12


+1 from me, fwiw.

[ nits ]

Final bullet of section 3.1: replace "as there are not protocol police,
..." with "as there are no protocol police, ...".