[DNSOP] Request: Review changes - draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc7958bis-03 → 04.

Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net> Fri, 09 August 2024 18:05 UTC

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Subject: [DNSOP] Request: Review changes - draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc7958bis-03 → 04.
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Dear DNSOP,

During the DNSDIR review of draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc7958bis-03, Petr Špaček
identified an issue: if you include the DNSKEY material you also need to
include the flags.

The authors have published a new version addressing these changes, as well
as addressing more minor comments received during IETF LC.

As this required a change to the XML syntax, I'd like to get the DNSOP WGs
review / feedback on these changes.

The IANA is eagerly awaiting this becoming a standard so that they can
update their trust anchor with the DNSKEY material - so, if you have any
strong objections to these changes, please let me know by end of day
(anywhere!) on Aug 18th

Latest version:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc7958bis/
Diff from -03:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc7958bis-03&url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc7958bis-04&difftype=--html

Thanks,
W