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Re: [DNSOP] draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis-10

Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu> Sun, 29 April 2018 04:02 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis-10
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On Fri, Apr 27, 2018 at 3:28 PM, Paul Hoffman <paul.hoffman@icann.org>
wrote:

> Please see the diffs at:
>    https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis-10
>
> This covers the discussions from the past few months, which included many
> of you. It has a couple of new terms, and a few reorganizations to bring
> related definitions next to each other.
>
> This could be ready for WG Last Call.
>
> --Paul Hoffman
>

Some minor nits on the text in the changes:

 Multicast DNS:
"Quoted from [RFC6762], Abstract)"
-- There is no matching beginning parenthesis "(" that I can find.

Host name:
"every character in each label are a letter, a digit, or a hyphen"
-- s/are/is/

6. DNS Servers and Clients
"(and may be part of the same software package)."
-- s/and/but/ - would read better?

Recursive mode:
'Section 4.3.1 of of [RFC1034] says "in \[recursive\] mode'
-- Are the "\" characters needed?

-- 
Bob Harold

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