Re: [dnssd] WGLC for draft-ietf-dnssd-srp

Hi All,

I have read the document and while I am brand new to IETF operations, I
believe it is largely ready to publish. A few smaller issues.

I had to re-read section 2.1.1 a few times to understand all the details.
One wording that threw me off a bit was "updates its local idea of the SRP
namespace". This could be improved by unifying terms from earlier in the
document, which outline this process as "registers the SRP client hostname
locally". Further, the section itself feels somewhat non-specific as to how
these types of records should be identified so that Advertising Proxy can
distinguish when to use the different conflict behaviours.

Section 3: "may made" should be "may make" I think.

Echoing Jonathan and Abtin's use-cases in Thread Border Routing, Nanoleaf
will be using this technology in our Thread Border routing feature as part
of our Shapes and Elements product lines.
https://www.techhive.com/article/3619639/nanoleafs-shapes-and-new-wood-like-elements-panels-will-include-thread-border-routers.html

Best Regards,

Nathan

Chief Product Officer
Nanoleaf

On Mon, Aug 2, 2021 at 2:16 PM Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:

>
> I've read the document and I think it is ready to be published.
>
> My one nit before moving forward is the authors run the nits tool and
> address the messages about updating references.
>
> tim
>
>
> On Wed, Jul 28, 2021 at 5:57 PM David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Hi DNSSD enthusiasts,
>>
>> This email starts an official Working Group Last Call
>> for draft-ietf-dnssd-srp. This call asks whether we believe the document is
>> ready for publication. As such we are asking two questions:
>>
>> 1) if you believe this document is not ready to publish, please speak up
>> now
>>
>> 2) if you have read the document and think it is ready, please say so as
>> well
>>
>> For this call to succeed, we'll need statements of explicit support from
>> people who have read the draft. Please send statements in either direction
>> as responses to this email. This call will be open until 2021-08-15 23:59
>> UTC.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> David
>> _______________________________________________
>> dnssd mailing list
>> dnssd@ietf.org
>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnssd
>>
> _______________________________________________
> dnssd mailing list
> dnssd@ietf.org
> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnssd
>