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Re: [dnssd] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04

Christian Huitema <huitema@huitema.net> Wed, 12 February 2020 09:11 UTC

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To: Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com>, ops-dir@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [dnssd] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04
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Thanks for the review, Tianran

On 2/10/2020 12:39 AM, Tianran Zhou via Datatracker wrote:
> Reviewer: Tianran Zhou
> Review result: Ready
>
> I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
> comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
> the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
> in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
> treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
>
> In general, this document is clear to me. I did not see any special operational
> or network management related issue. The problems and requirements are well
> discussed in this informational document.
>
> There are some obvious nits. For example, the number of the items in section
> 4.1 and 4.2.
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