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Re: [dnssd] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03.txt

Daniel KAISER <daniel.kaiser@uni.lu> Sat, 21 December 2019 18:45 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dnssd] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03.txt
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On 12/21/19 3:12 PM, Florian Adamsky wrote:
> Dear all,
>
> On Friday, Dec 20 2019, Daniel KAISER wrote:
>
>> I want to kindly ask the people who gave feedback for this  document, if
>> the feedback has been sufficiently addressed in this new version.
>
> thank you for taking my review into consideration. All my suggestions
> have been included in the latest version. 
Thank you very much for proofreading the draft yet again :).
> However, I have recognized only a
> minor issue with the formatting in Section 4. All numerical items are
> listed twice:
>
>  1.  [...]
>  1.
>  2.  [...]
>  2.
>
That is strange. When I compile the draft using xml2rfc on my machine I
do not get this problem.
Maybe it is because there are xml comments at the points where the
superfluous numeration appears?
Should I re-upload a version without these comments?

> But as I said, this is a minor formatting issue. Apart from that, I
> approve of advancing the dnssd requirements draft. Thanks again for
> writing the draft and shedding light on this important issue!
>
> [...]
>
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