[dnssd] Dnsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-23

Anthony Somerset via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 07 August 2023 05:29 UTC

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Reviewer: Anthony Somerset
Review result: Ready

Hello

I have been selected as the DNS Directorate reviewer for this draft. The
DNS Directorate seeks to review all DNS or DNS-related drafts as
they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special
request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the ADs.
For more information about the DNS Directorate, please see
https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/dnsdir

Please note that I previously reviewed version 20 and 22 of this draft and at that
time stated that the document was "Ready"

I am therefore only reviewing the differences between version 22 and current
version (23)

There are are clear and direct references to various DNS RFC's and this
draft is not in any conflict with the wider DNS space.

All in all I think this is a very well written document, although quite 
lengthy and makes lots of references to the appropriate RFC's it is well
understandable and didn't take me too long to get to grips with the context.

The Changes between versions 22 and 23 i can see are merely clarification
and structuring improvements and nothing that changes the substance of the
document.

Therefore I continue to consider this document as "Ready"

Many Thanks to the authors for this work.

Best Regards

Anthony Somerset
DNS Directorate