Re: [dnssd] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-dnssd-srp

Ted Lemon <mellon@fugue.com> Tue, 23 August 2022 16:19 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dnssd] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-dnssd-srp
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On Aug 23, 2022, at 10:33 AM, g_e_montenegro@yahoo.com wrote:
> The other changes are not urgent, as you say. Good call. So it’s ok with the minor changes per your response below.

Thanks. I’ve actually changed my mind about the IANA comment—I was feeling a bit overwhelmed last night, but that’s no reason not to include it. :]

> Section 8.1
>  
> OLD:
> IANA is requested, with the approval of IAB
> NEW:
> IANA is requested, with the approval of IAB (per https://www.iab.org/documents/correspondence-reports-documents/2017-2/iab-statement-on-the-registration-of-special-use-names-in-the-arpa-domain/)
>  
> I don’t want to add this reference—it’s not an RFC. We didn’t do this for previous documents that took advantage of the registry, so I don’t think it’s necessary. Is there a reason you think this is newly necessary in this case?

I think the correct place to put this is actually in the delegation section. I’ve made that change in this pull request—let me know what you think:

https://github.com/dnssd-wg/draft-ietf-dnssd-srp/pull/13