Re: [dnssd] Working Group Last Call - draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal

David Schinazi <dschinazi@apple.com> Fri, 16 February 2018 17:54 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dnssd] Working Group Last Call - draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal
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Hi,

(chair hat off)

I've reviewed draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-04 and -05 and think -05 is ready to move forward.
Draft -05 addresses the points I raised on -04 and in my opinion makes the document clearer.

Thanks,
David Schinazi


> On Feb 1, 2018, at 11:14, tjw ietf <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
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> 
> This starts a Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal
> 
> Current versions of the draft is available here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal/>
> 
> Please review the draft and offer relevant comments. Also, if someone feels the document is *not* ready for publication, please speak out with your reasons.
> 
> We are doing a three week Working Group Last Call process, and we're cross posting to a few groups where we hope to receive some strong reviews. 
> 
> This WGLC ends at midnight, 22 February 2018.
> 
> thanks
> Tim/suzanne
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