Re: [dnssd] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 29 November 2017 21:29 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [dnssd] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07
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Joel, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Best,
Alissa

> On Oct 7, 2017, at 6:47 PM, Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review Date: 2017-10-07
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-12
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard
> 
> Major issues: N/A
> 
> Minor issues: N/A
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
>    Given the confusion I experienced reading the early portions of the
>    document, a reference at the end of the introduction to the domain
>    discovery mechanisms may help readers.
> 
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