Re: [dnssd] Please review substantive changes to Update Lease

Ted Lemon <mellon@fugue.com> Fri, 03 February 2023 03:13 UTC

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From: Ted Lemon <mellon@fugue.com>
Date: Thu, 02 Feb 2023 19:12:58 -0800
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Subject: Re: [dnssd] Please review substantive changes to Update Lease
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You could just do a pull request. Might be easier.

Op do 2 feb. 2023 om 15:15 schreef Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com>

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> On Thu, Feb 2, 2023 at 6:04 PM Ted Lemon <mellon@fugue.com> wrote:
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>> On Thu, Feb 2, 2023 at 3:02 PM Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
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>>> PTP is Precision Time Protocol, the successor to NTP. of course with sub
>>> millisecond timing, things get complicated fast.
>>>
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>> Er. My understanding is that PTP is actually not as good as NTP.
>> Definitely not relevant here.
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> You are correct
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>>> One more thing - you capitalize Refresh, to describe Refresh messages,
>>> which is great.  But I notice in 5.2:
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>>> In order to prevent records expiring, requestors MUST Refresh resource
>>> records
>>>
>>>
>>> that one I would say no.
>>>
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>> Oops.
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>>> I can grind through the rest of the document to be annoying.
>>>
>>>>
>> You shouldn't waste time on editorial issues unless they make the
>> document difficult to understand. The RFC editor will address these.
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> As one who has shepherded many  documents through the IESG....
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> Actually , while you use "Refresh message(s)" in many cases I see a few
> cases where you just say "Refresh".
> I am terrible at grammar so I end up being overly consistent.  I'll drop
> you an issue with the specifics.
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> tim
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