[dnssd] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07

Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Sat, 07 October 2017 22:47 UTC

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Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2017-10-07
IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-12
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:
    Given the confusion I experienced reading the early portions of the
    document, a reference at the end of the introduction to the domain
    discovery mechanisms may help readers.