[dnssd] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnssd-push-23: (with COMMENT)

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Subject: [dnssd] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnssd-push-23: (with COMMENT)
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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dnssd-push-23: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Reference Nits:
-- Section 6.2.1.  Please add a citation for “US-ASCII”

-- Section 6.5.  Please add a citation for “apple dns_sd.h API”

Editorial Nits:
-- Section 2.  Editorial. s/poor imitations/imitation/

-- Section 6.  Typo. s/the the/the/