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Re: [dnssd] Please review substantive changes to Update Lease

Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 02 February 2023 23:15 UTC

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From: Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 02 Feb 2023 18:15:41 -0500
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Subject: Re: [dnssd] Please review substantive changes to Update Lease
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On Thu, Feb 2, 2023 at 6:04 PM Ted Lemon <mellon@fugue.com> wrote:

> On Thu, Feb 2, 2023 at 3:02 PM Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> PTP is Precision Time Protocol, the successor to NTP. of course with sub
>> millisecond timing, things get complicated fast.
>>
>
> Er. My understanding is that PTP is actually not as good as NTP.
> Definitely not relevant here.
>

You are correct

>
>
>> One more thing - you capitalize Refresh, to describe Refresh messages,
>> which is great.  But I notice in 5.2:
>>
>> In order to prevent records expiring, requestors MUST Refresh resource
>> records
>>
>>
>> that one I would say no.
>>
>
> Oops.
>
>
>> I can grind through the rest of the document to be annoying.
>>
>>>
> You shouldn't waste time on editorial issues unless they make the document
> difficult to understand. The RFC editor will address these.
>

As one who has shepherded many  documents through the IESG....

Actually , while you use "Refresh message(s)" in many cases I see a few
cases where you just say "Refresh".
I am terrible at grammar so I end up being overly consistent.  I'll drop
you an issue with the specifics.

tim

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