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Re: [dnssd] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03.txt

Florian Adamsky <florian.adamsky@hof-university.de> Sat, 21 December 2019 14:12 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dnssd] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03.txt
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Dear all,

On Friday, Dec 20 2019, Daniel KAISER wrote:

> I want to kindly ask the people who gave feedback for this  document, if
> the feedback has been sufficiently addressed in this new version.

thank you for taking my review into consideration. All my suggestions
have been included in the latest version. However, I have recognized only a
minor issue with the formatting in Section 4. All numerical items are
listed twice:

  1.  [...]
  1.
  2.  [...]
  2.

But as I said, this is a minor formatting issue. Apart from that, I
approve of advancing the dnssd requirements draft. Thanks again for
writing the draft and shedding light on this important issue!

[...]

Best Regards
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Prof. Dr. Florian Adamsky
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