[dnssd] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease
Chris Box <chris.box.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 28 October 2022 16:33 UTC
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Subject: [dnssd] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease
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Hi Ted, Stuart, and DNSSD, I'm shepherding the update-lease document. After going through the many checklists, I've found a number of areas where the current text may need some amending in order to give us a good shot at passing IETF Last Call and IESG Review. I've filed Github issues for them: https://github.com/dnssd-wg/draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease/issues/9 (Normative SHOULDs) https://github.com/dnssd-wg/draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease/issues/10 (Security Considerations) https://github.com/dnssd-wg/draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease/issues/11 (Timers) https://github.com/dnssd-wg/draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease/issues/12 (IANA Considerations) https://github.com/dnssd-wg/draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease/issues/13 (Editorial) https://github.com/dnssd-wg/draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease/issues/14 (ID Nits) Ted, will you have time to work though these within the next few weeks? The first three issues are the substantive ones where the wider working group may want to offer an opinion and propose text. What we write here could influence implementations for years to come. If you'd like to contribute, please either offer your thoughts on the list or use the WG's Github repo. If any points of debate arise on the repo then I'll endeavour to notify the list so everyone is involved. Thanks, Chris