Re: [dnssd] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease
Ted Lemon <mellon@fugue.com> Fri, 28 October 2022 18:54 UTC
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From: Ted Lemon <mellon@fugue.com>
Date: Fri, 28 Oct 2022 20:53:48 +0200
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To: Chris Box <chris.box.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [dnssd] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease
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I will try to make a pass through during IETF, but if not then, certainly the following week. Thanks! Op vr 28 okt. 2022 om 18:33 schreef Chris Box <chris.box.ietf@gmail.com> > Hi Ted, Stuart, and DNSSD, > > I'm shepherding the update-lease document. After going through the many > checklists, I've found a number of areas where the current text may need > some amending in order to give us a good shot at passing IETF Last Call and > IESG Review. I've filed Github issues for them: > > https://github.com/dnssd-wg/draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease/issues/9 > (Normative SHOULDs) > https://github.com/dnssd-wg/draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease/issues/10 > (Security Considerations) > https://github.com/dnssd-wg/draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease/issues/11 > (Timers) > https://github.com/dnssd-wg/draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease/issues/12 (IANA > Considerations) > https://github.com/dnssd-wg/draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease/issues/13 > (Editorial) > https://github.com/dnssd-wg/draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease/issues/14 (ID > Nits) > > Ted, will you have time to work though these within the next few weeks? > > The first three issues are the substantive ones where the wider working > group may want to offer an opinion and propose text. What we write here > could influence implementations for years to come. If you'd like to > contribute, please either offer your thoughts on the list or use the WG's > Github repo. If any points of debate arise on the repo then I'll endeavour > to notify the list so everyone is involved. > > Thanks, > Chris > >