Re: [Doh] Protocol Action: 'DNS Queries over HTTPS (DoH)' to Proposed Standard (draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-14.txt)

Star Brilliant <m13253@hotmail.com> Mon, 20 August 2018 17:38 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Doh] Protocol Action: 'DNS Queries over HTTPS (DoH)' to Proposed Standard (draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-14.txt)
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On Tue, Aug 21, 2018 at 2:35 AM The IESG <iesg-secretary@ietf.org> wrote:
>
> The IESG has approved the following document:
> - 'DNS Queries over HTTPS (DoH)'
>   (draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-14.txt) as Proposed Standard
>
> This document is the product of the DNS Over HTTPS Working Group.
>
> The IESG contact persons are Adam Roach, Alexey Melnikov and Ben Campbell.
>
> A URL of this Internet Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https/
>

Hi,

Glad to hear the approval!

By the way, Paul, do you plan to fix the spelling and grammatical issues that I mentioned in my previous mail? I am not sure if we might miss the chance.

Best regards,
Star Brilliant


On Fri, Aug 17, 2018 at 4:22 AM Star Brilliant <m13253@hotmail.com> wrote:
>
>
> On Page 6, Paragraph 2, Section 4.2:
>
> [...] The amount and type of information that a media type gives is solely up to the format, and not defined in this protocol.
>
> s/is/are/
>
>
>
> On Page 8, Paragraph 3, Section 5.1:
>
> [...] This requirement helps prevent exipred RRsets in messages in an HTTP cache from unintentionally being served.
>
> s/exipred/expired/
>
>
>
> On Page 4, Paragraph 5, Section 4.1:
>
> [...] When using the POST method the DNS query is included as the message body [...]
>
> (Minor issue) I suggest a comma (,) followed by "method". But okay if keep untouched.