Re: [Dots] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-14: (with COMMENT)

[Hayashi Yuhei <[e-mail]>]

Hi Murray,

Thank you for your comments. We updated the draft to address your comment.
Diff is here.
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-15

Please see inline.

2022年10月20日(木) 15:40 Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <[e-mail]>:

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> draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-14: No Objection
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> Just a couple of minor points:
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> The shepherd writeup template asks why the chosen status was appropriate, but
> the writeup itself doesn't answer this question.  (It is fairly obvious, but
> it's still good to have the complete writeup.)
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> Section 6 refers to "the IESG review" conducted by people who are not on the
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[Yuhei]
We addressed the comment.

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