Re: [Dots] Fw: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-21.txt

Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 29 May 2020 14:18 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Dots] Fw: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-21.txt
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Hi Ben,

Thanks for the follow up. I think all changes have been considered in the
new version.

Yours,
Daniel

On Thu, May 28, 2020 at 4:55 PM Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> wrote:

> On Fri, May 15, 2020 at 08:05:29PM +0000, Daniel Migault wrote:
> > Please find the version 21 that considers all feed backs - or at least
> my understanding of them - that we received until now.
>
> Thanks for the updates; I'll go ahead and kick off the IETF LC.
>
> It does look like one of my editorial comments was not understood as I
> intended, but we can treat that as we would a LC comment:
>
>
> Section 1
>
>    As DDoS solutions are broadly heterogeneous among vendors, the
>    primary goal of DOTS is to provide high-level interaction amongst
>    differing DDoS solutions, such as detecting, initiating, terminating
>    DDoS mitigation assistance or requesting the status of a DDoS
>    mitigation.
>
> nit: the list structure is not properly parallel.  It looks like the
> various clauses are meant to be "detecting DDoS",
> "initiating/terminating mitigation assistance", and "requesting
> mitigation status", so maybe this could become:
>
> % As DDoS solutions are broadly heterogeneous among vendors, the
> % primary goal of DOTS is to provide high-level interaction amongst
> % differing DDoS solutions, such as detecting DDoS attacks,
> % initiating/terminating DDoS mitigation assistance, or requesting the
> % status of a DDoS mitigation.
>
> The -21 adds the '/' in "initiating/terminating DDoS mitigation assistance"
> but there were a few other changes in my proposal that are needed to make
> the list structure parallel.  E.g., the full phrase "detecting DDoS
> attacks" and the serial comma.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Ben
>
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