Re: [Dots] WGLC for draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-04

H Y <yuuhei.hayashi@gmail.com> Wed, 09 February 2022 14:34 UTC

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Date: Wed, 09 Feb 2022 23:34:21 +0900
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Subject: Re: [Dots] WGLC for draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-04
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Hi Med,

Thank you for your comments and suggestions.

I will revise the draft in a few days.

Thanks,
Yuhei

2022年2月9日(水) 22:59 <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>:
>
> Hi Valery, all,
>
> I support advancing this document, but I think a revised version is needed.
>
> FWIW, some comments and suggestions can be found at:
> * pdf: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/master/draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-04-rev%20Med.pdf
> * doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-04-rev%20Med.doc
>
> Cheers,
> Med
>
> > -----Message d'origine-----
> > De : Dots <dots-bounces@ietf.org> De la part de Valery Smyslov
> > Envoyé : mercredi 9 février 2022 12:28
> > À : dots@ietf.org
> > Cc : dots-chairs@ietf.org; draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases@ietf.org
> > Objet : [Dots] WGLC for draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-04
> >
> > Hi,
> >
> > this message starts a two-week working group last call for draft-ietf-
> > dots-telemetry-use-cases-04.
> > The WGLC will end on Thursday, February 24. Please, review the draft and
> > send your comments to the mailing list.
> >
> > Regards,
> > Frank & Valery.
> >
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