Re: [Dots] TR: New Version Notification for draft-reddy-dots-telemetry-04.txt

kaname nishizuka <kaname@nttv6.jp> Sat, 16 November 2019 02:21 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Dots] TR: New Version Notification for draft-reddy-dots-telemetry-04.txt
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Hi Med,

One quick suggestion.

It would be worth to refer to [draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control] after this sentence
https://github.com/boucadair/draft-dots-telemetry/blob/7b8d2bce108ae45d677e97143fcb985b9a9aa74b/draft-reddy-dots-telemetry-04.txt#L414-L418

like:
The rate-limit action can be controlled by signal-channel [draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control] with more possibility than data-channel even when the pipe is overwhelmed

thanks,
Kaname

On 2019/10/18 18:38, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> Although we are waiting for a call for adoption for this draft, we made some changes which you can track with the diff provided below.
>
> Cheers,
> Med
>
>> -----Message d'origine-----
>> De : internet-drafts@ietf.org [mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org]
>> Envoyé : vendredi 18 octobre 2019 11:33
>> À : chenmeiling; BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN; Meiling Chen; Tirumaleswar
>> Reddy; Ehud Doron; Reddy K
>> Objet : New Version Notification for draft-reddy-dots-telemetry-04.txt
>>
>>
>> A new version of I-D, draft-reddy-dots-telemetry-04.txt
>> has been successfully submitted by Mohamed Boucadair and posted to the
>> IETF repository.
>>
>> Name:		draft-reddy-dots-telemetry
>> Revision:	04
>> Title:		Distributed Denial-of-Service Open Threat Signaling (DOTS)
>> Telemetry
>> Document date:	2019-10-18
>> Group:		Individual Submission
>> Pages:		41
>> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-reddy-dots-
>> telemetry-04.txt
>> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-reddy-dots-
>> telemetry/
>> Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-reddy-dots-telemetry-04
>> Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-reddy-dots-
>> telemetry
>> Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-reddy-dots-
>> telemetry-04
>>
>> Abstract:
>>     This document aims to enrich DOTS signal channel protocol with
>>     various telemetry attributes allowing optimal DDoS attack mitigation.
>>     This document specifies the normal traffic baseline and attack
>>     traffic telemetry attributes a DOTS client can convey to its DOTS
>>     server in the mitigation request, the mitigation status telemetry
>>     attributes a DOTS server can communicate to a DOTS client, and the
>>     mitigation efficacy telemetry attributes a DOTS client can
>>     communicate to a DOTS server.  The telemetry attributes can assist
>>     the mitigator to choose the DDoS mitigation techniques and perform
>>     optimal DDoS attack mitigation.
>>
>>
>>
>>
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