Re: [Dots] comments for this document as contributor://答复: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dots-server-discovery-03.txt
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Subject: Re: [Dots] comments for this document as contributor://答复: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dots-server-discovery-03.txt
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Hi Franck, Please see inline. Cheers, Med > -----Message d'origine----- > De : Xialiang (Frank, Network Standard & Patent Dept) > [mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com] > Envoyé : mardi 25 juin 2019 02:31 > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN > Cc : dots@ietf.org > Objet : 答复: comments for this document as contributor://答复: I-D Action: > draft-ietf-dots-server-discovery-03.txt > > Hi Med, > Please see inline: > > -----邮件原件----- > 发件人: mohamed.boucadair@orange.com [mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com] > 发送时间: 2019年6月24日 20:40 > 收件人: Xialiang (Frank, Network Standard & Patent Dept) > <frank.xialiang@huawei.com> > 抄送: dots@ietf.org > 主题: RE: comments for this document as contributor://答复: I-D Action: > draft-ietf-dots-server-discovery-03.txt > > Hi Franck, > > Thank you for the comments. > > Please see inline. > > Cheers, > Med > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > De : Xialiang (Frank, Network Standard & Patent Dept) > > [mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com] > > Envoyé : vendredi 21 juin 2019 10:20 > > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN > > Cc : dots@ietf.org > > Objet : comments for this document as contributor://答复: I-D Action: > > draft-ietf-dots-server-discovery-03.txt > > > > Hi authors, > > I have several comments as contributor below: > > > > 1. nits > > Section 1: > > s/The discovery methods can also used by a DOTS server to > > locate.../ The discovery methods can also be used by a DOTS server to > > locate.../ > > s/ [I-D.ietf-netconf-zerotouch]/[RFC8527]/ > > title section 5: s/DHCP Options for DOTS/ DHCP Options for DOTS > > Agent Discovery/ > > section 5.1.1: s/ The DHCPv6 DOTS option/ The DHCPv6 DOTS > > Reference Identifier option/ > > section 5.1.2: s/ The DHCPv6 DOTS option/ The DHCPv6 DOTS Address > > option/ > > section 5.2.1: s/ The DHCPv4 DOTS option/ The DHCPv4 DOTS > > Reference Identifier option/ > > section 5.2.2: s/ The DHCPv4 DOTS option/ The DHCPv4 DOTS Address > > option/ > > > > [Med] Fixed. > > > 2. comments: > > 1) In section 1, I don't see any relation of happy eyeball with > > your proposed dots agent discovery mechanism, it not so necessary to > > mention it; > > [Med] This is to warrant that, when multiple addresses are available such > as both ipv4 and ipv6, this I-D does not specify how address selection is > made. A pointer where such procedure is defined is helpful for the reader. > > [Frank]: My point is: in theory, discovery process is ahead of address > selection process, they have no overlapping. [Med] I agree. It is fine as far as we declare address selection out of scope. Will remove that sentence. > > > 2) In section 4, " DOTS clients will prefer information received > > from the discovery methods in the order listed. ": in what kind of > order? > > [Med] The order of appearance in the bullet list. > > > 3) For section 5.1.3 and section 5.2.3, there seems to be some > > confusions and conflictions about these points: what is the goal of > > returning more than one instance of OPTION_V6_DOTS if must only use > > the first instance? > > [Med] This text is to describe the behavior when the server returns more > while the client expects to receive only one. An alternative is to discard > such messages, but it is likely that the client won't be configured. This > behavior is more tolerant to misbehaving servers. > > [Frank]: why not just return one instance of OPTION_V6_DOTS? [Med] That is what a server following the spec will do. We are catching a misbehaving one. > > Does one DOTS Reference Identifier Option include one or > > multiple dots-agent-name? > > [Med] Only one name is allowed: > > o dots-agent-name: A fully qualified domain name of the peer DOTS > agent. > > [Frank]: but you have said in draft: " If the DHCP client receives > OPTION_V6_DOTS_RI only, but OPTION_V6_DOTS_RI option contains more than > one name, as distinguished by the presence of multiple root labels, the > DHCP client MUST use only the first name.". [Med] This is similar to the previous comment. The intent of the text you quoted is to cover the case of a (misbehaving) server which returns more than one instance. > > > 4) In section 5.2.1, will figure 5 be more appropriate as figure 3? > > [Med] I don't think so. Figure 3 does the job. > > [Frank]: no, I mean Figure 3 is better than Figure 5 > > > 5) For section 6--DNS service resolution , this section does not > > clarify the process and details about how to get DOTS agent IP based > > on the retrieved DOTS agent name? > > [Med] This is based on normal S-NAPTR lookups. Which further information > you think is missing? > > [Frank]: If I understand correctly, there are 2 ways of DNS service > resolution, one is by DNS domain name, the other is by DOTS agent name. > The section 6 is all about the former, no content about the latter one. [Med] What I meant is that the IP address(es) will be obtained by following the procedure in RFC3958. A Sample sequence diagram is available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3958#section-4.6 > > B.R. > Frank > > > 6) Section 7 (DNS-SD) is very short, can you clarify briefly what > > is the essential difference between this mechanism and previous DNS > > service resolution mechanism? > > [Med] The procedure defined in RFC6763 is followed. This section defines > the required information for DOTS context. We don't need to repeat the > details that are already covered in 6763. > > > 7) Is it possible to list the pro & con, or at least the related > > constraints for each discovery mechanisms at the end of the document? > > I think it's useful for reader in the real implementation. > > [Med] Actually, this will depend on the deployment context as discussed in > Section 3 rather than a purely technical pro&cons of each method. For > example, a CPE which embeds a DOTS client is likely to use the same > provisioning method to discover the peer DOTS agent. Such devices are > usually using DHCP for such matters. Leveraging DHCP seems natural. Please > check section 3. > > > > > Thanks! > > > > B.R. > > Frank > > > > > > -----邮件原件----- > > 发件人: Dots [mailto:dots-bounces@ietf.org] 代表 > > mohamed.boucadair@orange.com > > 发送时间: 2019年5月31日 17:19 > > 收件人: dots@ietf.org > > 主题: Re: [Dots] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dots-server-discovery-03.txt > > > > Hi all, > > > > The main change in this version is to integrate call-home > considerations. > > > > We do think this version is stable enough for a WGLC. > > > > Cheers, > > Med > > > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > > De : I-D-Announce [mailto:i-d-announce-bounces@ietf.org] De la part > > > de internet-drafts@ietf.org Envoyé : vendredi 31 mai 2019 11:10 À : > > > i-d-announce@ietf.org Cc : dots@ietf.org Objet : I-D Action: > > > draft-ietf-dots-server-discovery-03.txt > > > > > > > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > > > directories. > > > This draft is a work item of the DDoS Open Threat Signaling WG of > > > the IETF. > > > > > > Title : Distributed-Denial-of-Service Open Threat > > > Signaling (DOTS) Server Discovery > > > Authors : Mohamed Boucadair > > > Tirumaleswar Reddy > > > Filename : draft-ietf-dots-server-discovery-03.txt > > > Pages : 22 > > > Date : 2019-05-31 > > > > > > Abstract: > > > It may not be possible for a network to determine the cause for an > > > attack, but instead just realize that some resources seem to be > under > > > attack. To fill that gap, Distributed-Denial-of-Service Open > Threat > > > Signaling (DOTS) allows a network to inform a DOTS server that it > is > > > under a potential attack so that appropriate mitigation actions are > > > undertaken. > > > > > > This document specifies mechanisms to configure DOTS clients with > > > DOTS servers. The discovery procedure also covers the DOTS Signal > > > Channel Call Home. > > > > > > > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dots-server-discovery/ > > > > > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dots-server-discovery-03 > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dots-server-discove > > > ry > > > -03 > > > > > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > > > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dots-server-discovery-0 > > > 3 > > > > > > > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > > > submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at > > > tools.ietf.org. > > > > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > > > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > I-D-Announce mailing list > > > I-D-Announce@ietf.org > > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i-d-announce > > > Internet-Draft directories: http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html or > > > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/ietf/1shadow-sites.txt > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Dots mailing list > > Dots@ietf.org > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dots
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