Re: [Dots] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dots-rfc8782-bis-06.txt

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Hi Ben, all, 

This version addresses the comments from tsv, secdir, genart reviews: 

* Add subsections to 4.4.1
* Add a new appendix to list the protocol default/recommended values
* Make some edits for better clarity

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Dots [mailto:dots-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de internet-
> drafts@ietf.org
> Envoyé : mercredi 24 mars 2021 07:25
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> Cc : dots@ietf.org
> Objet : [Dots] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dots-rfc8782-bis-06.txt
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the DDoS Open Threat Signaling WG of the
> IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Distributed Denial-of-Service Open Threat
> Signaling (DOTS) Signal Channel Specification
>         Authors         : Mohamed Boucadair
>                           Jon Shallow
>                           Tirumaleswar Reddy.K
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-dots-rfc8782-bis-06.txt
> 	Pages           : 117
> 	Date            : 2021-03-23
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document specifies the Distributed Denial-of-Service Open
> Threat
>    Signaling (DOTS) signal channel, a protocol for signaling the need
>    for protection against Distributed Denial-of-Service (DDoS)
> attacks
>    to a server capable of enabling network traffic mitigation on
> behalf
>    of the requesting client.
> 
>    A companion document defines the DOTS data channel, a separate
>    reliable communication layer for DOTS management and configuration
>    purposes.
> 
>    This document obsoletes RFC 8782.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dots-rfc8782-bis/
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dots-rfc8782-bis-06
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dots-rfc8782-bis-06
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dots-rfc8782-bis-06
> 
> 
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