Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-channel-25
Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> Wed, 13 February 2019 17:53 UTC
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Date: Wed, 13 Feb 2019 11:53:09 -0600
From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
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Subject: Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-channel-25
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On Wed, Feb 13, 2019 at 05:35:01PM +0000, Roman Danyliw wrote: > Hi Ben and Data Channel Authors! > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Dots [mailto:dots-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Benjamin Kaduk > > Sent: Wednesday, February 13, 2019 11:46 AM > > To: draft-ietf-dots-data-channel@ietf.org > > Cc: dots@ietf.org > > Subject: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-channel-25 > > > This is my AD review of the -25 > > [snip] > > > Can someone (the shepherd?) confirm that an automated syntax checker > > has run over the JSON in examples? > > I'm the shepherd. I validated the YANG in Section 4.3, but forgot to do the JSON. I just ran the JSON in Figures 11, 12, 13, 14, 16, 17, 19, 23, 24, 25, 27, 29, and 31 through https://jsonlint.com/. All but Figure 16 came back fine. > > Per Figure 16, the following edit is necessary (i.e., add a quote around integer, s/integer/"integer"/) Hmm, that one is I think supposed to be more schema-like than example-like, so I actually was arguing to remove the quotes around "string" [and thus make the validator complain even more]. Thanks for checking! -Ben > OLD > "target-port-range": [ > { > "lower-port": integer, > "upper-port": integer > } > ], > "target-protocol": [ > integer > ], > NEW > "target-port-range": [ > { > "lower-port": "integer", > "upper-port": "integer" > } > ], > "target-protocol": [ > "integer" > ], > > Roman
- [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-channel-… Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… Roman Danyliw
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-data-chan… Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy