Re: [Dots] Adoption call for draft-nishizuka-dots-signal-control-filtering-06

Dan Wing <danwing@gmail.com> Tue, 16 April 2019 16:22 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Dots] Adoption call for draft-nishizuka-dots-signal-control-filtering-06
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Thanks.
-d


> On Apr 16, 2019, at 1:40 AM, <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Dan, 
> 
> Thank you for the comment. 
> 
> Some of the text is provided as a reminder to ease the readability of the document, while some (new) text (e.g., "Note that both 'immediate' and 'activate-when-mitigating' have an immediate effect when a mitigation request is being processed by the DOTS server.") is specific to the signal channel. 
> 
> A first attempt to tweak the text and avoid the potential confusion you raised is available at: 
> 
> https://github.com/boucadair/filter-control/blob/master/wdiff%20draft-nishizuka-dots-signal-control-filtering-06.txt%20draft-nishizuka-dots-signal-control-filtering-06.pdf 
> 
> Cheers,
> Med
> 
>> -----Message d'origine-----
>> De : Dots [mailto:dots-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de Dan Wing
>> Envoyé : lundi 15 avril 2019 20:05
>> À : Valery Smyslov
>> Cc : dots-chairs@ietf.org; dots@ietf.org; kaduk@mit.edu
>> Objet : Re: [Dots] Adoption call for draft-nishizuka-dots-signal-control-
>> filtering-06
>> 
>> I support adoption of this draft.
>> 
>> Nit: I am nervous it is unnecessarily re-stating normative behavior in its
>> Section 3.2.1 -- normative behavior of acl-name and activation-type which
>> should only be located in draft-ietf-dots-data-channel.  It's difficult to
>> tell if the subtle word differences are intended to change behavior or simply
>> restate the behavior described in draft-ietf-dots-data-channel.  I would just
>> remove the text that mimics draft-ietf-dots-data-channel and simply point off
>> to draft-ietf-dots-data-channel.
>> 
>> -d
>> 
>> 
>>> On Apr 8, 2019, at 8:28 AM, Valery Smyslov <valery@smyslov.net> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi all,
>>> 
>>> the chairs recently received an adoption request for draft-nishizuka-dots-
>> signal-control-filtering-06.
>>> 
>>> This message starts a two-week adoption call for draft-nishizuka-dots-
>> signal-control-filtering-06.
>>> The call ends up on Tuesday, April the 23rd.
>>> 
>>> Please send your opinion regarding adoption of this document to the list
>> before this date.
>>> If you think the draft should be adopted, please indicate whether you're
>> willing
>>> to review it/to work on it. If you think the draft should not be adopted,
>> please explain why.
>>> 
>>> Regards,
>>> Frank & Valery.
>>> 
>>> 
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