Re: [Dots] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-robust-blocks-05: (with COMMENT)

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Subject: Re: [Dots] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-robust-blocks-05: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Roman, 

Thank you for the comments. 

Please see inline.

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> Envoyé : lundi 3 octobre 2022 18:47
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> Cc : draft-ietf-dots-robust-blocks@ietf.org; dots-chairs@ietf.org;
> dots@ietf.org; valery@smyslov.net; valery@smyslov.net
> Objet : Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-robust-
> blocks-05: (with COMMENT)
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> draft-ietf-dots-robust-blocks-05: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> Section 7.  Recommend a pointer to explain the intent usage of the
> YANG module.
> 
> OLD
>    This document defines YANG data structures that are meant to be
> used
>    as an abstract representation in DOTS signal channel messages.
> As
>    such, the "ietf-dots-robust-trans" module (Section 5) does not
>    introduce any new vulnerabilities beyond those specified above.
> 
> NEW
> 
> Consistent with Section 5 of [RFC9131], this YANG module is not
> intended to be
> used via NETCONF/RESTCONF for DOTS server management purposes.  It
> serves as an
> abstract representation in DOTS signal channel messages.   The
> "ietf-dots-robust-trans" module (Section 5) does not introduce any
> new
> vulnerabilities beyond those specified above.
> 
> 

[Med] Looks good to me. We do already have similar text in Section 5.  Moved that text to Section 7 as you can see in https://tinyurl.com/dots-robust-latest.



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