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From: mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
To: "Daniel Migault (daniel.migault@ericsson.com)" <daniel.migault@ericsson.com>
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Re-, 

Apologies, I meant [RFC8782][RFC8783] that should normally be available by the end of the IETF LC for this draft. 

Thank you.  

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Dots [mailto:dots-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de
> mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
> Envoyé : vendredi 29 mai 2020 14:43
> À : Daniel Migault (daniel.migault@ericsson.com)
> Cc : dots@ietf.org; Benjamin Kaduk
> Objet : Re: [Dots] Fw: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-dots-
> use-cases-21.txt
> 
> Hi Daniel, all,
> 
> Apologies for the late comment, but can you please make the following
> change in the next iteration of the draft:
> 
> OLD:
>    This document provides sample use cases that provided input for the
>    design of the DOTS protocols.
> 
> NEW:
>    This document provides sample use cases that provided input for the
>    design of the DOTS protocols [RFC8772][RFC8773].
> 
> Thank you.
> 
> Cheers,
> Med
> 
> > -----Message d'origine-----
> > De : Dots [mailto:dots-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de Benjamin
> Kaduk
> > Envoyé : jeudi 28 mai 2020 22:55
> > À : Daniel Migault
> > Cc : dots@ietf.org
> > Objet : Re: [Dots] Fw: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-dots-
> > use-cases-21.txt
> >
> > On Fri, May 15, 2020 at 08:05:29PM +0000, Daniel Migault wrote:
> > > Please find the version 21 that considers all feed backs - or at
> > least my understanding of them - that we received until now.
> >
> > Thanks for the updates; I'll go ahead and kick off the IETF LC.
> >
> > It does look like one of my editorial comments was not understood as
> I
> > intended, but we can treat that as we would a LC comment:
> >
> >
> > Section 1
> >
> >    As DDoS solutions are broadly heterogeneous among vendors, the
> >    primary goal of DOTS is to provide high-level interaction amongst
> >    differing DDoS solutions, such as detecting, initiating,
> > terminating
> >    DDoS mitigation assistance or requesting the status of a DDoS
> >    mitigation.
> >
> > nit: the list structure is not properly parallel.  It looks like the
> > various clauses are meant to be "detecting DDoS",
> > "initiating/terminating mitigation assistance", and "requesting
> > mitigation status", so maybe this could become:
> >
> > % As DDoS solutions are broadly heterogeneous among vendors, the
> > % primary goal of DOTS is to provide high-level interaction amongst
> > % differing DDoS solutions, such as detecting DDoS attacks,
> > % initiating/terminating DDoS mitigation assistance, or requesting
> the
> > % status of a DDoS mitigation.
> >
> > The -21 adds the '/' in "initiating/terminating DDoS mitigation
> > assistance"
> > but there were a few other changes in my proposal that are needed to
> > make
> > the list structure parallel.  E.g., the full phrase "detecting DDoS
> > attacks" and the serial comma.
> >
> > Thanks,
> >
> > Ben
> >
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