Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-17
Daniel Migault <daniel.migault@ericsson.com> Fri, 12 July 2019 12:12 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-17
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Thanks for the follow up Ben. So I think your concern has been addressed by other changes in the document. Though I am not saying I do not introduced other nits of the same kind, I checked throughout the document and I believe any time web interface is mentioned it is currenlty clear it does not belong to the network admin. Maybe some english native co-authors could do a last proof-reading of the document to remove these sort of nits. the cuurent version is at: The current text is: """ The analysis from the orchestrator is reported to the network administrator via a web interface. If the network administrator decides to start the mitigation, the network administrator triggers the DDoS mitigation request using the web interface of a DOTS client communicating to the orchestrator DOTS server. This request is expected to be associated with a context that provides sufficient information to the orchestrator DOTS server to infer the DDoS Mitigation to elaborate and coordinate. """ Yours, Daniel On Thu, Jul 11, 2019 at 8:40 PM Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> wrote: > On Thu, Jul 04, 2019 at 04:13:38PM -0400, Daniel Migault wrote: > > > > c) it was unclear to me how to address the following comment. > > > > > > > The communication between a network administrator and the > > > orchestrator is also performed using DOTS. The network > administrator > > > via its web interfaces implements a DOTS client, while the > > > Orchestrator implements a DOTS server. > > > > > > nit: as written, this is saying that the network administrator has a > > > web interface. I think "its" is supposed to refer to something else. > > > > > > <mglt> > > What we are trying to say is that the network administrator sees its web > > interface, and instruct the DOTS client from that interface. I have not > > made any change to address that concern, as I do not clearly see what is > > confusing. > > </mglt> > > I don't think anyone is actually confused about the meaning; this was just > a pedantic comment about the grammar. "its web interface" has to belong > to something/someone, and with the current wording we are forced to parse > the sentence as "the network administrator's web interface", which is > surprising since a network administrator is a human and a web interface is > usually provided by a webserver. Perhaps we want to say "The network > administrator uses a web interface that implements a DOTS client"? > > -Ben > > _______________________________________________ > Dots mailing list > Dots@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dots >
- [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-17 Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases… Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases… Nik Teague
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases… Nik Teague
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases… Daniel Migault
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases… kaname nishizuka
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases… Daniel Migault
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases… Daniel Migault
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases… Robert Moskowitz
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases… Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases… Daniel Migault
- Re: [Dots] AD review of draft-ietf-dots-use-cases… Daniel Migault