Re: [Dots] WGLC on draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home-06

<mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Tue, 12 November 2019 06:42 UTC

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To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
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Subject: Re: [Dots] WGLC on draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home-06
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Hi Ben, 

That's better. Thanks. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Benjamin Kaduk [mailto:kaduk@mit.edu]
> Envoyé : lundi 11 novembre 2019 19:06
> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN
> Cc : Jon Shallow; 'Valery Smyslov'; dots@ietf.org; dots-chairs@ietf.org
> Objet : Re: [Dots] WGLC on draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home-06
> 
> On Fri, Nov 08, 2019 at 02:21:24PM +0000, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
> wrote:
> > Hi Jon,
> >
> > Thank you for the feedback.
> >
> > Please see inline.
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Med
> >
> > > -----Message d'origine-----
> > > De : Jon Shallow [mailto:supjps-ietf@jpshallow.com]
> > > Envoyé : vendredi 8 novembre 2019 14:53
> > > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN; 'Valery Smyslov'; dots@ietf.org; dots-
> > > chairs@ietf.org
> > > Objet : RE: [Dots] WGLC on draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home-06
> > >
> > > Hi Med et al,
> > >
> > > I have gone back over the heartbeat call home and have a couple of
> comments
> > >
> > > In
> > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dots-signal-channel-38#section-
> 4.5..1
> > >
> > > OLD
> > >
> > >    Figure 18 shows how to obtain acceptable configuration parameters
> for
> > >    the DOTS server.
> > >
> >
> > [Med] "for" is used in reference to "acceptable" from the perspective of
> the server. Sure, the information will be retrieved from the server.
> 
> perhaps "how to obtain configuration parameters that the DOTS server will
> find acceptable", then?
> 
> -Ben
> 
> >
> > > NEW
> > >
> > >    Figure 18 shows how to obtain acceptable configuration parameters
> for
> > >    the DOTS client.
> > >
> > > or NEW
> > >
> > >    Figure 18 shows how to obtain acceptable configuration parameters
> from
> > >    the DOTS server.
> > >