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Re: [Dots] Adoption call for draft-nishizuka-dots-signal-control-filtering-06

<mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Tue, 16 April 2019 08:40 UTC

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From: mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
To: Dan Wing <danwing@gmail.com>, Valery Smyslov <valery@smyslov.net>
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Subject: Re: [Dots] Adoption call for draft-nishizuka-dots-signal-control-filtering-06
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Hi Dan, 

Thank you for the comment. 

Some of the text is provided as a reminder to ease the readability of the document, while some (new) text (e.g., "Note that both 'immediate' and 'activate-when-mitigating' have an immediate effect when a mitigation request is being processed by the DOTS server.") is specific to the signal channel. 

A first attempt to tweak the text and avoid the potential confusion you raised is available at: 

https://github.com/boucadair/filter-control/blob/master/wdiff%20draft-nishizuka-dots-signal-control-filtering-06.txt%20draft-nishizuka-dots-signal-control-filtering-06.pdf 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Dots [mailto:dots-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de Dan Wing
> Envoyé : lundi 15 avril 2019 20:05
> À : Valery Smyslov
> Cc : dots-chairs@ietf.org; dots@ietf.org; kaduk@mit.edu
> Objet : Re: [Dots] Adoption call for draft-nishizuka-dots-signal-control-
> filtering-06
> 
> I support adoption of this draft.
> 
> Nit: I am nervous it is unnecessarily re-stating normative behavior in its
> Section 3.2.1 -- normative behavior of acl-name and activation-type which
> should only be located in draft-ietf-dots-data-channel.  It's difficult to
> tell if the subtle word differences are intended to change behavior or simply
> restate the behavior described in draft-ietf-dots-data-channel.  I would just
> remove the text that mimics draft-ietf-dots-data-channel and simply point off
> to draft-ietf-dots-data-channel.
> 
> -d
> 
> 
> > On Apr 8, 2019, at 8:28 AM, Valery Smyslov <valery@smyslov.net> wrote:
> >
> > Hi all,
> >
> > the chairs recently received an adoption request for draft-nishizuka-dots-
> signal-control-filtering-06.
> >
> > This message starts a two-week adoption call for draft-nishizuka-dots-
> signal-control-filtering-06.
> > The call ends up on Tuesday, April the 23rd.
> >
> > Please send your opinion regarding adoption of this document to the list
> before this date.
> > If you think the draft should be adopted, please indicate whether you're
> willing
> > to review it/to work on it. If you think the draft should not be adopted,
> please explain why.
> >
> > Regards,
> > Frank & Valery.
> >
> >
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