Re: [Dots] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-robust-blocks-05: (with COMMENT)

[Roman Danyliw <[e-mail]>]

Hi Med!

Thanks for the reply and associated edits.

Roman

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> blocks-05: (with COMMENT)
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> Hi Roman,
> 
> Thank you for the comments.
> 
> Please see inline.
> 
> Cheers,
> Med
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> > De : Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <[e-mail]> Envoyé : lundi 3
> > octobre 2022 18:47 À : The IESG <[e-mail]> Cc :
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> > Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-robust-
> > blocks-05: (with COMMENT)
> >
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> > draft-ietf-dots-robust-blocks-05: No Objection
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> > COMMENT:
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> > Section 7.  Recommend a pointer to explain the intent usage of the
> > YANG module.
> >
> > OLD
> >    This document defines YANG data structures that are meant to be
> > used
> >    as an abstract representation in DOTS signal channel messages.
> > As
> >    such, the "ietf-dots-robust-trans" module (Section 5) does not
> >    introduce any new vulnerabilities beyond those specified above.
> >
> > NEW
> >
> > Consistent with Section 5 of [RFC9131], this YANG module is not
> > intended to be used via NETCONF/RESTCONF for DOTS server management
> > purposes.  It serves as an
> > abstract representation in DOTS signal channel messages.   The
> > "ietf-dots-robust-trans" module (Section 5) does not introduce any new
> > vulnerabilities beyond those specified above.
> >
> >
> 
> [Med] Looks good to me. We do already have similar text in Section 5.  Moved
> that text to Section 7 as you can see in https://tinyurl.com/dots-robust-latest.
> 
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