[drinks] draft-ietf-drinks-spp-framework: XML related feedback
Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de> Mon, 26 January 2015 11:35 UTC
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Subject: [drinks] draft-ietf-drinks-spp-framework: XML related feedback
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Hi there, below some XML related feedback, applying to <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-drinks-spp-framework-09#section-8>: 1) I'm not sure it's a good idea to repeat some specific XML related information from the XML spec, such as about case-sensitivity; if people can understand XML schema, they don't need this. 2) "All SPPF elements are defined in the namespaces in the IANA Considerations section and in the Formal Framework Specification section of this document." - which makes the IANA considerations section a normative part of the spec. Bad idea. Please state the actual namespace name where it belongs (where the XML vocab is defined). Best regards, Julian
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