[drinks] [IANA #807172] AW: Expert Review for draft-ietf-drinks-spp-protocol-over-soap-07

["Pearl Liang via RT" <[e-mail]>]

Hi all,

Graham has reviewed the below comments and has no further question.

Thanks,
~pl


On Wed Feb 04 08:31:51 2015, [e-mail] wrote:
> (author hat on)
> 
> Pearl,
> 
> please find my responses to Graham's questions below:
> 
> > [...]
> > I do have a couple of questions:
> >
> > (a) the XML appears to use at least two new URNs:
> >
> > xmlns:sppfb="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:sppf:base:1"
> > xmlns:sppfs="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:sppf:soap:1"
> >
> > but only registers one:
> >
> > urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:sppf:soap:1
> >
> > It's probably fine - I think the other is registered in
> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-drinks-spp-framework-
> > 09#section-11.1.
> > Will these documents be going forward together? A little more
> > explanation
> > and cross-reference might conceivably be helpful (e.g. that the WSDL
> > definition uses these new URNs, and where the other one is defined).
> 
> This is correct - the registration of the other namespace is requested
> in the Framework document. And, yes, the intention is that both
> documents move forward together, since they are tightly coupled
> anyways.
> 
> We will add explanation and cross-reference to the document together
> in either a new revision of the document or an RFC Editor Note - my
> proposal for such text would be to add a new paragraph in Section 12
> (IANA Considerations), saying:
> 
> Note that the WSDL Specification also makes use of the
> "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:sppf:base:1" XML Namespace URN, which is
> defined in [SPPF].
> 
> > (b) it's not clear from the registration what the URN is being
> > registered *as*.
> > From context, I think it is as an *XML namespace*, but I think it
> > could be
> > clearer (both XML Namespaces and XML Schemas are mentioned in the
> > accompanying text).
> 
> Again, we will address this together with other changes to the
> document, my proposal is to change the first paragraph of Section 12
> into:
> 
> This document uses URNs to describe XML Namespaces and XML Schemas.
>   According to [RFC3688], IANA is requested to perform  registration
> of the following URN in the
>  IANA XML Namespace Registry:
> 
> (plus add the following Line to the front of the registration request)
> 
> Registration request for the SPPF SOAP XML namespace:
> 
> Hope that clarifies the questions?
> thanks,
> Alex