Minor edits for smtpupd-12
Gregory Neil Shapiro <gshapiro@gshapiro.net> Mon, 31 July 2000 04:34 UTC
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Date: Sun, 30 Jul 2000 21:34:04 -0700
From: Gregory Neil Shapiro <gshapiro@gshapiro.net>
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Subject: Minor edits for smtpupd-12
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In accordance with the procedures for moving forward, I will be mailing out separate messages for issues I found in reading the document (sorry in advance for what may appear like a mail bomb). However, I am going to send all of the typo corrections together in this single message as I believe they don't need to be tracked, just corrected. If the chair would prefer otherwise, I will repost. 2.3.5 "("labels" in DNS terminology [RFC-DNS]" - Need closing parenthesis after [RFC-DNS]. 2.4 "(e.g., "TO:" and "to:" in the MAIL command)" - Should be RCPT command. 3.5.3 "A server MUST NOT return a 220 code in response to a VRFY or EXPN command unless it has actually verified the address. In particular, a server MUST NOT return 220 if" - The two "220" mentions should be "250". 4.1.2/4.1.3 - The ABNF comments (';' sections) should line up vertically in the definitions for A-d-l and esmtp-value (4.1.2) and IPv6-comp (4.1.3). 4.1.3 "a standardized "tag" that identifies the address syntax, a space, and the address itself," - It's a colon, not a space after the tag. 4.4 - The ABNF comments should use ';' in comment continuations just as is done in other ABNF in the document and should be vertically aligned. The definitions which need this fix are Stamp, TCP-info, Addtl-Link, and Attdl-Protocol. 4.5.1 "the domains for which the SMTP s erver" - s/s erver/server/ D.3 - Step 2: There should not be a blank line between "S: 250 OK" and "C: QUIT"
- Minor edits for smtpupd-12 Gregory Neil Shapiro