Re: [Dtls-iot] draft-ietf-dice-profile-15

Hannes Tschofenig <hannes.tschofenig@gmx.net> Thu, 10 September 2015 08:26 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Dtls-iot] draft-ietf-dice-profile-15
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Hi Brian,

thanks for double-checking.

On 09/09/2015 10:26 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
> Thanks.
> 
> Two nits survive:
> 
> 1. The first paragraph of the Terminology section is still broken. Try this:
> 
>   <t>The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL
>   NOT", "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL"
>   in this document are to be interpreted as described in RFC 2119
>   <xref target="RFC2119"/>.</t>

OK.

> 
> 2. See my reply to Thomas on the Gen-ART list.
> 

Used this sentence instead:

"The IPv6 multicast address used for CoAP link-local discovery is FF02::FD."

Ciao
Hannes


> Regards
>    Brian
> 
> 
> On 09/09/2015 23:09, Hannes Tschofenig wrote:
>> Hi all,
>>
>> you may have seen my responses to Tina, Gabriel, and to Brian on the
>> list. Based on their feedback I have updated the draft and I have just
>> submitted a snapshot:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dice-profile-15
>>
>> Thanks for the review comments.
>>
>> Ciao
>> Hannes
>>