Re: [dtn-interest] [irsg] IRSG review of draft-irtf-dtnrg-tcp-clayer-06.txt

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Hi,

could we see the new revision submitted soon?

Thanks,
Lars

On Jul 31, 2013, at 20:16, "Eggert, Lars" <lars@netapp.com> wrote:

> The ID submission tool is open again.
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> Lars
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> On Jul 28, 2013, at 13:18, Dirk Kutscher <Dirk.Kutscher@neclab.eu> wrote:
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>> Hi Simon,
>> 
>> Very good -- I agree with what you proposed in your reply -- looking forward to the new revision.
>> 
>> Best regards,
>> Dirk
>> 
>> 
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: Simon Perreault [mailto:simon.perreault@viagenie.ca]
>>> Sent: Mittwoch, 17. Juli 2013 13:33
>>> To: Dirk Kutscher
>>> Cc: Internet Research Steering Group (irsg@irtf.org); draft-irtf-dtnrg-tcp-
>>> clayer@tools.ietf.org; dtn-interest@irtf.org
>>> Subject: Re: IRSG review of draft-irtf-dtnrg-tcp-clayer-06.txt
>>> 
>>> Thanks for your very detailed review! I agree with almost all your proposed
>>> changes. I'll publish a new revision.
>>> 
>>> Le 2013-07-16 22:41, Dirk Kutscher a écrit :
>>>> - section 3:
>>>> <comment>
>>>>  The protocol overview needs to say that a TCPCL can be used to
>>>>  transmit several bundles, but that multiple bundles MUST be
>>>>  transmitted consecutively (i.e., no inter-leaving of bundle
>>>>  segments). In addition, I think, you also have to say that the
>>>>  blocks of a particular bundle MUST be sent sequentially (no change
>>>>  of block order).
>>>> </comment>
>>> 
>>> Agreed. I would also add that interleaving can be accomplished with bundle
>>> fragmentation.
>>> 
>>>> - section 3:
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  This protocol provides bundle conveyance over a TCP connection and
>>>>  specifies the encapsulation of bundles as well as procedures for TCP
>>>>  connection setup and teardown.
>>>>  </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>>  <comment>
>>>>   "The service of this protocol is the transmission of DTN bundles
>>>>    over TCP. This document specifies the encapsulation of bundles,
>>>>    procedures for TCP setup and teardown, and a set of messages and
>>>>    node requirements."?
>>>>  </comment>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 3.1:
>>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>>  The first paragraph is not very clear. You want to say that there
>>>>  are different specific messages for sending and receiving
>>>>  operations (in addition to connection setup/teardown).  TCPCL is
>>>>  symmetric, i.e., both sides can start sending data segments in a
>>>>  connection, and one side's bundle transfer does not have to
>>>>  complete before the other side can start sending data segments on
>>>>  its own. Hence, the protocol allows for a bi-directional mode of
>>>>  communication.
>>>> </comment>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 3.2:
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  Note that the sending node may transmit multiple
>>>>  DATA_SEGMENT messages without necessarily waiting for the
>>>>  corresponding ACK_SEGMENT responses.  This enables pipelining of
>>>>  messages on a channel.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>>  This is a too important property to just mention it on the side of
>>>>  an example description. You should mention this in the protocol
>>>>  overview. You should also mention that there is no explicit flow
>>>>  control on the TCPCL layer.
>>>> </comment>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 3.2:
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>   However, interleaving data segments from different bundles is not
>>>>   allowed.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>>  Again, this is too important to not mention it earlier.
>>>> </comment>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> -section 4:
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  The manner in which a bundle node makes the decision to establish
>>>>  such a connection is implementation-dependent.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>> I think you want to say that the implementation can decide, possibly
>>>> case-by-case, at runtime (unless it is fixed). Perhaps better so
>>>> say: "It is up to the implementation to decide how and when
>>>> connection setup is triggered. For example..."
>>>> </comment>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> -section 4:
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  Therefore, the node MUST retry
>>>>  the connection setup only after some delay and it SHOULD use a
>>>>  (binary) exponential backoff mechanism to increase this delay in case
>>>>  of repeated failures.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>> You should specify what is meant by "some delay". Is it completely
>>>> up to the implementation? Do you want to RECOMMEND a minimum
>>> delay?
>>>> </comment>
>>> 
>>> How about recommending 1 second minimum?
>>> 
>>>> - section 4.1:
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  magic:  A four byte field that always contains the byte sequence 0x64
>>>>       0x74 0x6e 0x21, i.e., the text string "dtn!".
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> <newtext>
>>>>  magic:  A four byte field that always contains the byte sequence 0x64
>>>>       0x74 0x6e 0x21, i.e., the text string "dtn!" in US-ASCII.
>>>> </newtext>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 4.1:
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  version:  A one byte field value containing the current version of
>>>>       the protocol.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> <newtext>
>>>>  version:  A one byte field value containing the value 3 (current version of
>>>>       the protocol).
>>>> </newtext>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 5.2
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>> However, a node MUST be able to receive a bundle that has been
>>>>  transmitted in any segment size.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>> 
>>>> How feasible is this, for example for constrained devices? Even if a
>>>> node does not intend to store and reassemble bundles, there may be
>>>> certain limits for the maximum size of segments that it can
>>>> receive. Has there been a discussion to make this
>>>> negotiable/configurable? How should a node react if it cannot
>>>> receive/process any more bytes for a transmitted segment?
>>>> </comment>
>>> 
>>> The intent here is not to override a node's intrinsic limitation on bundle sizes.
>>> The intent is that if a node is able to receive, over TCP, a bundle of size X with
>>> segment size Y, then it MUST also be able to do it with any segment size <= X.
>>> I'll adjust the text.
>>> 
>>>> - section 5.2
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  Following the message header, the length field is an SDNV containing
>>>>  the number of bytes of bundle data that are transmitted in this
>>>>  segment.  Following this length is the actual data contents.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>> This should be mentioned earlier in section 5.2  </comment>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 5.3
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  To transmit an acknowledgment, a node first transmits a message
>>>>  header with the ACK_SEGMENT type code and all flags set to zero, then
>>>>  transmits an SDNV containing the cumulative length of the received
>>>>  segment(s) of the current bundle.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> <newtext>
>>>>  To transmit an acknowledgment, a node first transmits a message
>>>>  header with the ACK_SEGMENT type code and all flags set to zero,
>>>>  then transmits an SDNV containing the cumulative length in bytes of
>>>>  the received segment(s) of the current bundle.
>>>> </newtext>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 5.4
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  Note: If a bundle transmission if aborted in this way, the receiver
>>>>  may not receive a segment with the 'E' flag set to '1' for the
>>>>  aborted bundle.  The beginning of the next bundle is identified by
>>>>  the 'S' bit set to '1', indicating the start of a new bundle.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>> 
>>>>  Should this be turned into a general rule? I.e.: "if a receiver
>>>>  receives a segment for a new bundle without having seen the final
>>>>  segment of a previous bundle, it SHOULD disregard all segments of
>>>>  the incompletely received bundle."
>>> 
>>> I don't think so. The received segments are valid. The receiver can do
>>> whatever it wants with them.
>>> 
>>>>  (wording may need some work)
>>>> 
>>>>  It's probably good to use "SHOULD" here, because the node may
>>>>  already have forwarded the segments...
>>>> </comment>
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> - section 6.1
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  The format of the shutdown message is as follows:
>>>> 
>>>>                       1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 2 2 2 2 2 2 2 2 2 2 3 3
>>>>   0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1
>>>>  +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
>>>>  |  0x5  |0|0|R|D| reason (opt)  | reconnection delay (opt)      |
>>>>  +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
>>>> 
>>>>              Figure 8: Format of bundle shutdown messages
>>>> 
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>>  Is it really efficient to have variable length messages here by
>>>>  making the reason code optional? How about always requiring it and
>>>>  then allow for a default value (0x00)?
>>>> </comment>
>>> 
>>> I think it's a backward compatibility wart that we need to live with.
>>> That is, earlier versions of the protocol did not send those two fields.
>>> (not 100% sure)
>>> 
>>>> - section 6.1
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  If either node terminates a connection prematurely in this manner, it
>>>>  SHOULD send a SHUTDOWN message and MUST indicate a reason code
>>> unless
>>>>  the incoming connection did not include the magic string.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>>  Why not send a reason like "illegal syntax"?
>>>> </comment>
>>> 
>>> Wasn't there talks of a draft registering a bunch of additional reason codes?
>>> 
>>>> - section 6.7
>>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>> 
>>>> Regarding the peer entity authentication issue, I think you have to
>>>> use a stronger statement, like "a node SHALL NO" use the endpoint
>>>> identifier conveyed in the TCPCL connection message to derive a peer
>>>> node's entity unless it can ascertain it via other means."
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> If it is possible to do that through the Bundle Security Protocol,
>>>> you could be a bit more specific on how the Bundle Authentication
>>>> Block would be used. I assume one TCPCL peer node would become a
>>>> security source in an RFC 6257 sense?
>>>> 
>>>> BTW, you are using the term "Bundle Authentication Header" -- I
>>>> think it's "Bundle Authentication Block".
>>>> 
>>>> In general, it could be worthwhile stating that TCPCL does not
>>>> provide any security services and that RFC 6257's mechanisms should
>>>> be used.
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> BTW, is the use of TLS for TCPCL defined or excluded? You may want
>>>> to say something about why it's not applicable
>>>> </comment>
>>> 
>>> Why wouldn't it be applicable? I think we *want* it to be applicable!
>>> 
>>>> - section 10.2
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  [RFC6256]  Eddy, W. and E. Davies, "Using Self-Delimiting Numeric
>>>>             Values in Protocols", RFC 6256, May 2011.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>>   Isn't that a normative reference for this spec?
>>>> </comment>
>>> 
>>> No, because that's an informational RFC.
>>> 
>>>> EDITORIAL COMMENTS
>>>> ------------------
>>>> 
>>>> General:
>>>> 
>>>> - make usage and capitalization of Bundle Protocol (sometimes referred
>>>> to as "Bundling Protocol", "bundle protocol" etc.) consistent
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 2.1
>>>>  <oldtext>
>>>>    Bundle payload --  A bundle payload (or simply "payload") is the
>>>>       application data whose conveyance to the bundle's destination is
>>>>       the purpose for the transmission of a given bundle.
>>>>  </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>>  <comment>
>>>>    IMO this can be said in a clearer way: "... application
>>>>    data that is transmitted to a BP application at a Bundle
>>>>    Endpoint"?
>>>>  </comment>
>>> 
>>> We should just remove this and refer to RFC 5050 section 3.1.
>>> 
>>>> - section 2.1:
>>>>  <oldtext>
>>>>  Bundle node --  A bundle node (or simply a "node") is any entity that
>>>>       can send and/or receive bundles.  The particular instantiation
>>>>       of this entity is deliberately unconstrained, allowing for
>>>>       implementations in software libraries, long-running processes,
>>>>       or even hardware.  One component of the bundle node is the
>>>>       implementation of a convergence layer adapter.
>>>>  </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>>  <comment>
>>>>    I don't think the second sentence ("The particular
>>>>    instantiation...") is really needed.  This holds for most network
>>>>    elements these days.
>>>>  </comment>
>>> 
>>> We should just remove this and refer to RFC 5050 section 3.1.
>>> 
>>>> - section 2.1:
>>>>  <oldtext>
>>>>  Convergence layer adapter --  A convergence layer adapter (CLA) sends
>>>>       and receives bundles utilizing the services of some 'native'
>>>>       link, network, or internet protocol.  This document describes
>>>>       the manner in which a CLA sends and receives bundles when using
>>>>       the TCP protocol for inter-node communication.
>>>>  </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>>  <comment>
>>>>     Does it make make sense to define "Convergence Layer" first,
>>>>     before defining CLA? Is the CLA definition needed at all
>>>>     (assuming CL is defined)?
>>>>  </comment>
>>> 
>>> We should just remove this and refer to RFC 5050 section 3.1.
>>> 
>>>> - section 2.2:
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  TCPCL Connection --  [...] The lifetime of a TCPCL connection is one-to-one
>>>>       with the lifetime of an underlying TCP connection.
>>>> 	[...]
>>>>  </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>>  <comment>
>>>>     "The lifetime of a TCPCL connection is bound to the
>>>>     lifetime of the underlying TCP connection."?
>>>>  </comment>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> -section 4:
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  Once a TCP connection is established, each node MUST immediately
>>>>  transmit a contact header over the TCP connection.  The format of the
>>>>  contact header is described in Section 4.1).
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> <newtext>
>>>>  Once a TCP connection is established, each node MUST immediately
>>>>  transmit a contact header over the TCP connection.  The format of the
>>>>  contact header is described in Section 4.1.
>>>> </newtext>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 4.1:
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  local EID:  An octet string containing the EID of some singleton
>>>>       endpoint in which the sending node is a member, in the canonical
>>>>       format of <scheme name>:<scheme-specific part>.  A eight byte
>>>>       EID is shown the clarity of the figure.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> <newtext>
>>>>  local EID:  An octet string containing the EID of some singleton
>>>>       endpoint in which the sending node is a member, in the canonical
>>>>       format of <scheme name>:<scheme-specific part>.  A eight byte
>>>>       EID is shown for clarity of the figure.
>>>> </newtext>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 4.2:
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>       The reactive fragmentation enabled parameter is set to true iff
>>>>       the corresponding flag is set in both contact headers.
>>>> 
>>>>       The bundle refusal capability may only be used iff both peers
>>>>       indicate support for it in their contact header and segment
>>>>       acknowledgement has been enabled.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> <newtext>
>>>>       The reactive fragmentation enabled parameter is set to true iff
>>>>       the corresponding flag is set in both contact headers.
>>>> 
>>>>       The bundle refusal capability is set to true if the
>>>>       corresponding flag is set in both contact headers and if
>>>>       segment acknowledgment has been enabled.
>>>> </newtext>
>>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>> I'd raher use the same or similar wording to not irritate the implementer.
>>>> </comment>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 5.1
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>> Table 2: TCPCL Header Types
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> <newtext>
>>>> Table 2: TCPCL Message Types
>>>> </newtext>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 5
>>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>>  For the different subsections for the individual messages, please
>>>>  use the message type names from table 2 in the headings, for
>>>>  example: "Bundle Data Transmission (DATA_SEGMENT)". Also, I'd
>>>>  recommend to align the order of the subsections with the order of
>>>>  message types in table 2.
>>>> </comment>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>>  I would also recommend to use a consistent structure for each of
>>>>  the subsections, i.e., perhaps
>>>>    - purpose
>>>>    - syntax
>>>>    - procedures / node requirements
>>>> </comment>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 5.3
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  If so, then
>>>>  the receiver MUST transmit a bundle acknowledgment header when it
>>>>  successfully receives each data segment.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  If so, then
>>>>  the receiver MUST transmit a bundle acknowledgment message when it
>>>>  successfully receives each data segment.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 5.6
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  If no message (keepalive or other) has been received for at least
>>>>  twice the keepalive interval, then either party may terminate the
>>>>  session by transmitting a one byte message type code of SHUTDOWN (as
>>>>  described in Table 2) and closing the TCP connection.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> <newtext>
>>>>  If no message (keepalive or other) has been received for at least
>>>>  twice the keepalive interval, then either party MAY terminate the
>>>>  session by transmitting a one byte SHUTDOWN message  (as
>>>>  described in Table 2) and by closing the TCP connection.
>>>> </newtext>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 6.1
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  In case acknowledgments have been
>>>>  negotiated, it is advisable to acknowledge all received data segments
>>>>  first and then shut down the connection.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> <newtext>
>>>>  In case acknowledgments have been
>>>>  negotiated, a node SHOULD  acknowledge all received data segments
>>>>  first and then shut down the connection.
>>>> </newtext>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 6.1
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  This may, for example, be used to notify
>>>>  that the node is currently not capable of or willing to communicate.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> <newtext>
>>>>  This may, for example, be used to notify
>>>>  that the node is currently not able or willing to communicate.
>>>> </newtext>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>>> - section 10.2
>>>> 
>>>> <oldtext>
>>>>  [refs.dtnsecurity]
>>>>             Symington, S., Farrell, S., and H. Weiss, "Bundle Security
>>>>             Protocol Specification", Internet Draft, work in progress
>>>>             draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-security-03.txt, April 2007.
>>>> </oldtext>
>>>> 
>>>> <comment>
>>>>    This is RFC 6257.
>>>> </comment>
>>> 
>>> Agreed.
>>> 
>>> Simon
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