Re: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-17.txt

"Burleigh, Scott C (US 312B)" <scott.c.burleigh@jpl.nasa.gov> Tue, 05 November 2019 16:01 UTC

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From: "Burleigh, Scott C (US 312B)" <scott.c.burleigh@jpl.nasa.gov>
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Thanks, Brian, I noticed that one too, and there are a couple of other nits that Marius Feldman has found.  I plan to repair these when I fix whatever other problems are identified in the IESG review.

Scott

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Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-17.txt

Scott,
I found a minor nit when updating my BPv7 decoder implementation.
In the last (bpbis-17) draft there are changes to the flag bit encodings. The "manifest" block type/flag encodings are removed from the spec, but Section 4.1.3. "Bundle Processing Control Flags" still has a statement:

. The bundle contains a "manifest" extension block.  (Boolean)
It seems like this statement is vestigial and could be removed to avoid confusion.

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Subject: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-17.txt


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Delay/Disruption Tolerant Networking WG of the IETF.

        Title           : Bundle Protocol Version 7
        Authors         : Scott Burleigh
                          Kevin Fall
                          Edward J. Birrane
        Filename        : draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-17.txt
        Pages           : 63
        Date            : 2019-10-25

Abstract:
   This Internet Draft presents a specification for Bundle Protocol,
   adapted from the experimental Bundle Protocol specification
   developed by the Delay-Tolerant Networking Research group of the
   Internet Research Task Force and documented in RFC 5050.


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