Re: [Ecrit] WGLC draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-11 -- end date Oct 13

Dwight Purtle <dwightpurtle@gmail.com> Fri, 01 October 2021 00:14 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Ecrit] WGLC draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-11 -- end date Oct 13
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Two minor corrections I submitted two versions ago haven't been made yet.
Neither one is substantive.

1.  On page 6, fourth paragraph, the second sentence beginning with the
word "Because" is an incomplete sentence.  I think it can be fixed by
simply deleting the word "Because".
2.  On page 7, in section 4 Returned Location Information, second
paragraph, fourth sentence, the word "suppose" should be "supposed", to
read "what the intended location information was supposed to be".

I have no substantive changes to propose or issues to raise.  I support
advancement of the draft after these minor corrections are made.

Dwight Purtle


On Wed, Sep 29, 2021 at 2:51 PM Randall Gellens <rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org>
wrote:

> This starts WGLC for draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-11, a LoST
> extension to return complete or similar location info.
>
> Please send both comments and messages that you support advancement of
> the draft to this mailing list before October 13.
>
> Thank you,
>
> --Randall
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