Re: [Ecrit] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-21: (with COMMENT)

Randall Gellens <rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org> Thu, 19 January 2017 08:04 UTC

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Hi Mirja,

Thanks for your comments.  Please see inline.

At 6:00 AM -0800 1/17/17, Mirja Kuehlewind wrote:

>  Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
>  draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-21: No Objection
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>  A few comments:
>  - "Migration of the three architectural models to next-generation
>  (all-IP)" could be an own section

It could be a subsection, but I think it fits well as flow within the section.

>  - Shouldn't this last part of section 6 ("If new data blocks are
>  needed...") go into I-D.ietf-ecrit-ecall?

It was originally there, but was moved here 
because that draft is more focused on eCall, 
while this draft is the more general extension, 
so it seems to fit well here.

>  - There is a lot of redunancy within this document but also compared to
>  I-D.ietf-ecrit-ecall (mainly section 8, some parts of 9, and 10). Is
>  there no better way to handle this?

I rewrote several sections of both drafts to 
remove unnecessary redundancy to dress Alissa's 
review comments prior to IESG submission.  If 
there are additional edits you feel would enhance 
the readability, please let me know the specifics.

>  - There is no action to unlock door (in section 9). I assume that's
>  because of the security risk of someone unlocking doors remotely. If
>  that's the case I would also remove this from the example list used
>  previously in the doc several times. Maybe instead discuss this case in
>  the security considerations?

Thanks for catching this, I appreciate it.  This 
was an error that was introduced when the 
specific actions not needed for eCall were moved 
into this draft and made more general.  I've 
fixed it by readding the "door-lock" action and 
the text explaining that the "requested-state" 
attribute is set to "locked" or "unlocked".

>  - Does it really need a Lamp State Registry? What additional states could
>  come up in future beside 'on', 'off', and 'flash'? And even is there are
>  additional states, will that change dynamically enough to have an own
>  registry?

Well, it's already been suggested that changing 
color might be added, but I agree that we 
probably don't need the registry.  I'll specify 
the three values now.

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