Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-12.txt
Randall Gellens <rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org> Tue, 26 October 2021 22:02 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-12.txt
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I support Dan's suggested edits. Regarding the suggestion to reorganize the text, Dan, do you have specific suggestions (e.g., move paragraphs x-y of Section 3 to follow Paragraph z of Section 4)? --Randall On 12 Oct 2021, at 9:21, Dan Banks wrote: > I am satisfied with the changes made in this version. There are a > handful of new editorial issues: > > Invalid Location and Valid Location definitions have a difference in > wording that I think is unintentional: > Invalid Location: A Civic Location that, when included > versus > Valid Location: A Civic Location, when included > I prefer the inclusion of 'that'. > Both of these definitions are also missing a period at the end. > > In section 3, > there is no such thing as "15th Ave North > should be > there is no such thing as "15th Avenue North" > (expand Ave and add missing double quote) > > In the first paragraph of section 4, there appears to be an escaping > issue: > <civicAddressgt; > > I still believe the document could be improved with a bit of > reorganization of sections 3 and 4, but I support advancing the > document without additional changes if that is the consensus. > > Dan Banks > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: Ecrit <ecrit-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of >> internet-drafts@ietf.org >> Sent: Monday, October 11, 2021 7:30 PM >> To: i-d-announce@ietf.org >> Cc: ecrit@ietf.org >> Subject: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-12.txt >> >> >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >> directories. >> This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with >> Internet >> Technologies WG of the IETF. >> >> Title : A LoST extension to return complete and >> similar location info >> Authors : Brian Rosen >> Roger Marshall >> Jeff Martin >> Filename : draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-12.txt >> Pages : 17 >> Date : 2021-10-11 >> >> Abstract: >> This document introduces a new way to provide returned location >> information in LoST responses that is either of a completed or >> similar form to the original input civic location, based on >> whether >> valid or invalid civic address elements are returned within the >> <findServiceResponse> message. This document defines a new >> extension >> to the <findServiceResponse> message within the LoST protocol >> [RFC5222] that enables the LoST protocol to return in a response a >> completed civic address element set for a valid location response, >> and one or more suggested sets of similar location information for >> an >> invalid location. These two types of civic addresses are referred >> to >> as either "complete location" or "similar location", and are >> included >> as a compilation of CAtype xml elements within the existing LoST >> <findServiceResponse> message structure. >> >> >> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: >> https://nam12.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdata >> tracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-ecrit-similar- >> location%2F&data=04%7C01%7Cdbanks%40ddti.net%7C2677c3624c9b43 >> ef4bf408d98d0f141a%7C4c0f48ba5f2944b1b29c1aff8251101b%7C0%7C0%7C6 >> 37695918186302761%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMD >> AiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata= >> P3BH1wZSXLDkc8UrC7mVYLaNlTMWLj63lN4M9sivfa0%3D&reserved=0 >> >> There is also an htmlized version available at: >> https://nam12.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdata >> tracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location- >> 12&data=04%7C01%7Cdbanks%40ddti.net%7C2677c3624c9b43ef4bf408 >> d98d0f141a%7C4c0f48ba5f2944b1b29c1aff8251101b%7C0%7C0%7C637695918 >> 186302761%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIj >> oiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=mPns%2 >> BzOYeJw5Wv6ZksmQKvkQVy%2BooWwkpOX0jJOK9Rw%3D&reserved= >> 0 >> >> A diff from the previous version is available at: >> https://nam12.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fww >> w.ietf.org%2Frfcdiff%3Furl2%3Ddraft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location- >> 12&data=04%7C01%7Cdbanks%40ddti.net%7C2677c3624c9b43ef4bf408 >> d98d0f141a%7C4c0f48ba5f2944b1b29c1aff8251101b%7C0%7C0%7C637695918 >> 186302761%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIj >> oiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=BQ1%2F >> b3vGjlo4Oh80lx6xiKegu1FpzlWjsTb%2BCydveVI%3D&reserved=0 >> >> >> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: >> https://nam12.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=ftp%3A%2F%2Fftp.ietf >> .org%2Finternet- >> drafts%2F&data=04%7C01%7Cdbanks%40ddti.net%7C2677c3624c9b43e >> f4bf408d98d0f141a%7C4c0f48ba5f2944b1b29c1aff8251101b%7C0%7C0%7C63 >> 7695918186302761%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMD >> AiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata= >> 20pHDNNfNOyd1JvEeCtlhJz%2FT6VJzj3wN%2FKSSD8G63k%3D&reserve >> d=0 >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Ecrit mailing list >> Ecrit@ietf.org >> https://nam12.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fww >> w.ietf.org%2Fmailman%2Flistinfo%2Fecrit&data=04%7C01%7Cdbanks% >> 40ddti.net%7C2677c3624c9b43ef4bf408d98d0f141a%7C4c0f48ba5f2944b1b29 >> c1aff8251101b%7C0%7C0%7C637695918186312756%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbG >> Zsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6 >> Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=fyo4rmGKcNdQUGrlrcucZBRYR8JBmvaQKB99 >> XOeE7jI%3D&reserved=0 > > _______________________________________________ > Ecrit mailing list > Ecrit@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ecrit
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- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-… Dwight Purtle
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-… Dan Banks
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-… Michael Smith
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-… Roger Marshall
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-… Dan Banks
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-… Randall Gellens
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-… Randall Gellens
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-… Randall Gellens
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-… Dan Banks