Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-10.txt

["Caron, Guy" <[e-mail]>]

There is also this one that seems not addressed:

The document does not use a convention to express XML types such as <blablabla> for elements, 'boobooboo' for attributes, "heyheyhey" for values, etc. in the text. Should it?

Guy

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De : Ecrit <[e-mail]> De la part de Caron, Guy
Envoyé : 9 septembre 2021 17:38
À : Brian Rosen <[e-mail]>et>; ECRIT <[e-mail]>
Objet : [EXT]Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-10.txt

I gleaned through -10 and can say that most of my comments and proposed changes are addressed. Thank you.

The one exception is in section 4, the last sentence of the 3rd paragraph, which says: "However, if a subsequent request includes the Complete Location, the corresponding request MAY include elements in the unchecked list."

In my proposed changes, I suggested changing "corresponding request" to "corresponding response" but that change was not accepted. Unless I'm missing something, the sentence as currently stated makes no sense.

Other than that, this draft is good to go.

Guy

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De : Ecrit <[e-mail]> De la part de Brian Rosen Envoyé : 2 septembre 2021 19:50 À : ECRIT <[e-mail]> Objet : [EXT]Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-10.txt

This version fixes all reported issues in -09

Brian

> On Sep 2, 2021, at 7:48 PM, [e-mail] wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies WG of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : A LoST extension to return complete and similar location info
>        Authors         : Brian Rosen
>                          Roger Marshall
>                          Jeff Martin
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-10.txt
> 	Pages           : 18
> 	Date            : 2021-09-02
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document introduces a new way to provide returned location
>   information in LoST responses that is either of a completed or
>   similar form to the original input civic location, based on whether
>   valid or invalid civic address elements are returned within the
>   findServiceResponse message.  This document defines a new extension
>   to the findServiceResponse message within the LoST protocol [RFC5222]
>   that enables the LoST protocol to return in it's response a completed
>   civic address element set for a valid location response, and one or
>   more suggested sets of similar location information for an invalid
>   location.  These two types of civic addresses are referred to as
>   either "complete location" or "similar location", and are included as
>   a compilation of CAtype xml elements within the existing LoST
>   findServiceResponse message structure.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location/
> 
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-locatio
> n-10
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-10
> 
> 
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