Re: [Ecrit] draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-14: Naming consistency of various parameters / namespaces

Hi Matt,

thanks for the detailed review and for spotting these inconsistencies.

On 10/23/2013 05:33 PM, Matt Serra wrote:
> In reviewing the latest additional data draft (v14) - I noticed that
> there are a few inconsistencies that should be addressed.  Issues and
> thoughts are below.
>
> I ask that whatever is decided recognize that other forms of
> additional data will be defined (Additional Caller and Additional
> Location data), so we should pick names that don't limit our options
> when those are introduced.
>
> 1) Section 9.2 - The purpose parameter in the table should read as
> 'emergencyCallData' per the section title.
>

Fixed.

> 2) Section 9.4 - We may want to reconsider renaming the MIME
> registrations to match the purpose parameter name.  Section 9.4 calls
> for a pattern of 'emergencyCallData.<block>+xml'

Makes sense.

>
> 3) Section 9.5: the various URN Sub-Namespace registrations are named
> inconsistently.  We should iron this out:
>
> - urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:emergencyCallAddlData -
> urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:emergencyCallProviderInfo -
> urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:emergencyCall.SvcInfo -
> urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:emergencyCall.DevInfo -
> urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:emergencyCall.SubInfo -
> urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:emergencyCall.Comment

I changed it to

urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:emergencycalldata:<block>

>
> 4) The schema registries in section 9.6 are different still from
> section 9.5. These should agree, no?

They should be aligned for better readability.

Thanks a lot for the review.

I am working on the updated version and will post a link to the new 
document to the list. Might take a little while since I have to fix 
examples and schemas as well.

Ciao
Hannes

>
> Thanks,
>
> Matthew A. Serra, ENP Sr. Director, Product Management Rave Mobile
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