[Ecrit] Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-22: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

"Alexey Melnikov" <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> Sun, 15 January 2017 11:18 UTC

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Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for
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DISCUSS:
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This is a well written document. I have only a couple of minor issues I
would like to discuss before recommending approval:

1) +per media type suffix needs to be registered in
<http://www.iana.org/assignments/media-type-structured-suffix/media-type-structured-suffix.xhtml#structured-syntax-suffix>

2) In 9.1.1.2: should "details" element allow for language tag XML
attribute? Should this element be allowed to appear multiple times with
different language tags in order to allow for multiple human readable
reasons (in different languages)?


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COMMENT:
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On page 23, in the example: typo Content-Dispositio