[Ecrit] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea-21: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 04 March 2020 17:46 UTC

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Subject: [Ecrit] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea-21: (with COMMENT)
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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea-21: No Objection

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Thank you for the work put into this document.

Please address all the NITs found in the IoT directorate review by Gonzalo Salgueiro:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea-21-iotdir-telechat-salgueiro-2020-03-02/
Thank you again Gonzalo !

And another NIT below.

I hope that this helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

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About "incidents", s/may not be present/MAY not be present/ ?