Re: [Ecrit] draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes

Victor Burton <victor.burton@comtechtel.com> Fri, 01 October 2021 17:54 UTC

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From: Victor Burton <victor.burton@comtechtel.com>
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Subject: Re: [Ecrit] draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes
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From: Victor Burton
Sent: Friday, September 17, 2021 2:31 PM
To: ecrit@ietf.org
Subject: RE: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes

Resending because I don't think my previous email made it to the ECRIT list server.
After the discussion on the topic of "planned changes algorithms" yesterday (NENA i3 WG meeting on 9/16/21), the polling method seems the most practical and effective.

From: Victor Burton
Sent: Wednesday, September 15, 2021 1:34 PM
To: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes@ietf.org
Subject: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes

Hi Authors -


  1.  Nit: Abstract

Change to ", and add a date which requests..."

2)     Nit: <plannedChange> element

Change to "...defines a new element to <findService> request called..."

3)     Nit: <plannedChange> element

Change from: "To minimize storage requirements of at the server,..."





Thanks,

Victor



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