Re: [Ecrit] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-rosen-ecrit-service-urn-subregistries-00.txt

Howdy,

No objection to this, but this read oddly:

 This document extends the urn:service:sos.police to allow the type of
   police force.  The type of force is a token separated from
   urn:service.sos.police by a period.

Perhaps instead of "type of force" you could say "The type of
law enforcement agency is a token..."?

Also, it might be slightly better to say "allow the system to
distinguish the type"
.

Ted

On Fri, Dec 16, 2016 at 12:32 PM, Brian Rosen <br@brianrosen.net> wrote:

> FYI
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> Begin forwarded message:
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> *From: *internet-drafts@ietf.org
> *Subject: **I-D Action:
> draft-rosen-ecrit-service-urn-subregistries-00.txt*
> *Date: *December 16, 2016 at 3:31:51 PM EST
> *To: *<i-d-announce@ietf.org>
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
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>        Title           : A Subregistry for urn:service:sos.police, fire
> and ambulance
>        Author          : Brian Rosen
> Filename        : draft-rosen-ecrit-service-urn-subregistries-00.txt
> Pages           : 5
> Date            : 2016-12-16
>
> Abstract:
>   In most countries, there are multiple kinds of police forces.
>   RFC5031 defines a "Service URN" which is used to route emergency
>   calls.  The urn has a sub registry for different kinds of emergency
>   services that may be reached from different telephone numbers or
>   service numbers (as opposed to a single number like 112).  In many
>   countries, the "police" service is not a single service, but more
>   than one service where the service area and/or types of emergencies
>   they respond to are different.  In some countries there are multiple
>   ambulance services.  This document defines sub registries for
>   urn:service:sos.police, urn:service:sos.ambulance and, for
>   completeness, urn:service:sos.fire.  It also provides an initial set
>   of entries for these sub registries.  These services are in addition
>   to the base urn:service:sos.police, etc. services.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-rosen-ecrit-service-
> urn-subregistries/
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> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-rosen-ecrit-service-urn-subregistries-00
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