Re: [Ecrit] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea-21: (with COMMENT)

Brian Rosen <br@brianrosen.net> Mon, 09 March 2020 21:06 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Ecrit] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea-21: (with COMMENT)
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-22 fixes your comments, I hope:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea-22

> On Feb 28, 2020, at 1:23 PM, Mirja Kühlewind via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea-21: No Objection
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> One question: Should non-inactive SIP MESSAGEs be rated-limited somehow or it
> that already specified in the SIP spec (sorry don't know that by heart ;-)? If
> so a pointer would probably be good. Or maybe another thing to add to section 7
> (or a subsection or an own section) or alternatively to the security
> considerations section I guess.
> 
> One small comment/nit:
> Sec 5.2:
> "AlertMsg-Error values sent in
>   provisional responses must be sent using the mechanism defined in
>   [RFC3262]; or, if that mechanism is not negotiated, it must be
>   repeated in the final response to the transaction."
> Maybe two times MUST?
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