Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-12.txt

[Michael Smith <[e-mail]>]

I thought the use of "Ave" was the reason there was no such thing as "15th
Ave North". Did I miss the point of the example?

I would prefer that the examples follow the convention of separating the
street address from the city with a comma, like "6000 15th Avenue North,
Seattle, WA". It doesn't affect implementation of course, but "6000 15th
Avenue, North Seattle, WA " is different from "6000 15th Avenue North,
Seattle, WA". It's a very small nit, and up to the editor as far as I'm
concerned. 

I also noticed the "gt;" issue but didn't see any others when I searched for
it.

I support advancing the document. It seems pretty clear to me.

Michael Smith
Chief Technologist, Equature/DSS Corp.
Ph: 606.877.2788 | Mobile: [phone]

-----Original Message-----
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I am satisfied with the changes made in this version.  There are a handful
of new editorial issues:

Invalid Location and Valid Location definitions have a difference in wording
that I think is unintentional:
Invalid Location:  A Civic Location that, when included versus Valid
Location:  A Civic Location, when included I prefer the inclusion of 'that'.
Both of these definitions are also missing a period at the end.

In section 3,
there is no such thing as "15th Ave North should be there is no such thing
as "15th Avenue North"
(expand Ave and add missing double quote)

In the first paragraph of section 4, there appears to be an escaping issue:
<civicAddressgt;

I still believe the document could be improved with a bit of reorganization
of sections 3 and 4, but I support advancing the document without additional
changes if that is the consensus.

Dan Banks

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> This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with 
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>         Title           : A LoST extension to return complete and similar
location info
>         Authors         : Brian Rosen
>                           Roger Marshall
>                           Jeff Martin
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-12.txt
> 	Pages           : 17
> 	Date            : 2021-10-11
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document introduces a new way to provide returned location
>    information in LoST responses that is either of a completed or
>    similar form to the original input civic location, based on whether
>    valid or invalid civic address elements are returned within the
>    <findServiceResponse> message.  This document defines a new extension
>    to the <findServiceResponse> message within the LoST protocol
>    [RFC5222] that enables the LoST protocol to return in a response a
>    completed civic address element set for a valid location response,
>    and one or more suggested sets of similar location information for an
>    invalid location.  These two types of civic addresses are referred to
>    as either "complete location" or "similar location", and are included
>    as a compilation of CAtype xml elements within the existing LoST
>    <findServiceResponse> message structure.
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